Thursday, September 21, 2006

"Disfunctioned Rhyme"

Once that she left you to go,
she won't come back do you know.
But that time spend with her,
will always stay in mind's flow.

[Distant voice]
Duskun Sun
Sitting in a pun.
Listen this,
life's really a chiken run.
Maybe you never asked and
that's why you were never told.
the reason to believe
why I risked my life for you all.

[Rap Track]
I did not do any research
I went straight into the mirth
you'll joke at it,I know
but listen to it first

"What's your name" ,she asked me
my mouth went dry,
the bolt had really hard.
I fell for like a crazy frog.
Days later ,we sat in the dark,
watching a movie [dirty thoughts apart]
time passed ,we came more close, closer though
I really loved her, I asked....
the voice replied, speak to her so.
the park's corner was lonely,
no one to bother about.
pruning her brown hairs I was,
while her husked voice
made my soul craving to grow.

Our faces were inches apart
when I said the three words,
that brought her reply...a passionate kiss,
I prayed it to last for eternity.
But the story is never fine...
happy endings don't come in our time.
Why things always tend to go wrong,
and that's why I wanted to tell
in this verse so long.

Once that she left you to go,
she won't come back do you know.
But that time spend with her,
will always stay in mind's flow.

[Rap Track]
Scene's changing,we are back to present times,
she left me,and I did no crime.
It was her fault,her ambition,
her defination of clear substitution.
I didn't became her's one in the new frame,
some stupid freak dislodged my name.
What did I left,what did I tried,
that made her think that I was
only good for a dime.

I don't complain,
thinking bad about you is outta my mind.
you did what you did,
but that won't make me hate
you back. [note the pun in rhyme]
I still love you, still feel the
breath of you, the passions evident
in that prime time.
And now I just plan to live,
stay alive,with your burden,
my worst design.

Once that she left you to go,
she won't come back do you know.
But that time spend with her,
will always stay in mind's flow.

Now to more general people I move,
just asking a question on the groove..
why don't the girls get the right
person that they really need,
for todaY
for everydaY
for all the daYs.
why do they make the wrong choice,
why do they dream with eyes wide.
running with crazy mad freaks
good for nothing shitheads,
crazy for fun, nothin else indeed.

Once that she left you to go,
she won't come back do you know.
But that time spend with her,
will always stay in mind's flow.

Decided in mind, with a
disfunctioned rhyme,
I breath the pain in the sane
not knowing for what I pine.
Why do the real good guys,
stay behind ,just to look and smile
just to CALL that it's not their time.

I had been a part of both
the scenes, seen the movie...
both forward and rewind.




1 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

the chorus part is good...
one she left you to go

but the first rap track
"the bolt had really hard
i felt like a crazy frog"

i guess you might change it a lil bit...
otherwise its all good!

8:26 AM  

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